2012年1月17日火曜日

JARNAL E

     Long time ago, there was town in the mountain guarded by cursed storm. King wanted to go out of town but it hard to do. Using strong house but it didn't mean. King said to people does anyone know how to go out from cursed storm. If you could tell me the way how I will give you money and my crown. The young man who could use magic said to king I think I can stop cursed storm my magic power. He went to the out side of town and got into cursed storm. The cursed storm tried to kill him, but he avoid the storm by his magic power. In some wise he could through out the wind and he found beautiful chapel standing on hill. He entered chapel and he was surprised to see beautiful woman sleeping in a side of chair. She woke up because of young man's sound of shoes. She asked him how to come and who are you? She seemed little scaring. The young man introduced himself gently and explained why he came. She told him why cursed storm appeared and how to stop. After the explain, he started crying.Why did he cry? Because the way to stop the wind should kill her and use her blood. Young man thought deeply and deeply. Finally he found answer. He could stop the wind and he got the lot of money and got the king of crown. And also he married beautiful woman! He could stop the wind not to kill her and got the blood from her by using his magic!!    

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  1. Great surprise ending! I really want to know the technical details of his magic and how it works - Verty interesting storytelling!

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